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Before and After: Any Improvement?

ArsalanKhanArtist

Published: May 17, 2012

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Description

Before and After: Any Improvement?

Please comments, it would helpful.

Image size

3749x2667px 1.98 MB

Make

Apple

Model

iPod touch

Shutter Speed

1/15 second

Aperture

F/2.4

Focal Length

4 mm

ISO Speed

1000

Date Taken

Apr 28, 2012, 12:32:56 AM

Comments5

dragon85492

May 17, 2012

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yes much inprovement
i find that in the first pic the amount of yellow is overwhelming the lips were to big as well as the eyes the skin tone was far to close to yellow the hair was not detailed and the robe was too simple

in the 2012 pc the colors balnace nicely and the robes and hair are more detailed the green eye color helps to put a nicer balance in the color one thing that i would fix is the un-natural bend in the finger but other than that your work is perfect

i think that this was fair right?

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